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Marshmallow Garden by =Ophelias-Overdose:iconOphelias-Overdose:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Expressive

©2009 =Ophelias-Overdose
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Photographer: Starkall

Model, MUA, Editor: :iconophelias-overdose:

Wig and Skirt made by Ophelia *g*

Critiques


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*tRoUbLeSoMecHiCa Apr 22, 2009, 4:31:05 PM
It is a beautiful picture, but it is a little too dark. Lightening it would help. The dress stands out more than your face, but if that is what your going for, it looks fine. Your left arm does not look very natural, as in your wrist looks a little strained. The pink on your gown that is on the ground, looks as in it could be a little farther away that you. It looks a little like you might be stepping on it just a little bit. I don't know if it's just my eyes/computer but your face seems just a tad fuzzy (as in the quality). Overall, the photo is beautiful and a very unique idea.
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=elize Apr 21, 2009, 6:27:10 PM
i love the styling and pose of the model, but something seems "off" about her relation to the background... maybe more centered or farther to one side? she's just not really here or there to me... i think either centered in this format, or on the side if it was in a horozontal format. i think the lighting could be a little brighter too, esp on the face, and i thought the flowers on the bottom of the dress took away. i love the scenery though, id love to see more shoots like these! maybe with some with the girl closer to the trees, she kindof looks giant compared to them, almost superimposed. the pose and dress would make a perfect stock reference photo too, she's so dainty!
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=Ophelias-Overdose Apr 21, 2009, 8:32:28 AM
Thanks!

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=xXScarletButterflyXx Apr 21, 2009, 8:33:49 AM
It's very pretty, but I think it should have a better focus on the face. The background becomes a bit to bit for it.
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~worldsend007 Apr 21, 2009, 8:34:54 AM
i really don't like the plastic at the bottem but other than that its a really good picuture

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Letting the darkness to confine me in my time of need
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~xxarishaxpxx Apr 21, 2009, 8:34:56 AM
I love the corset!

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No like,no look, it's that simple, no one has time for bloody haterz!:x
Yaoi? why not?:heart:
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~vomitkandi Apr 21, 2009, 8:38:45 AM
I LOVE the outfit (but then again I love all of your outfits :D) and your figure is to die for :O Beautiful photo! :+fav:
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~GothPoetGirl Apr 21, 2009, 8:50:46 AM
wunderschön, again:D

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Love, Tünde
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
10/600 second
F/4.2
32 mm
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Apr 16, 2009, 6:24:06 PM

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