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Epiphany by =Ophelias-Overdose:iconOphelias-Overdose:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Expressive

©2009 =Ophelias-Overdose
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Artist's Comments

Photographer, editor: :iconeyeseephotography:

Model, make-up, styling: :iconophelias-overdose:

Corset: V-Couture


:kiss: Wig and dress are selfmade :kiss:

Critiques


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*Picksy Sep 29, 2009, 6:41:14 PM
Its a beautiful idea. I think the wholly white pallet works wonders and really brings the focus to the beautiful detailing on the corset. It certainly made me want to go buy it. The modelling is very well done, since you make a beautiful model but enhance rather than over power the clothes you are in.

There are only two real ';problems'. Firstly the rabbits do not feel well integrated into the piece. White your body has soft edges, they have hard clear ones making them seem fake. This is especially true of the one on the bottom left.

Secondly the background feels too flat to me. The beautiful feathery texture on the floor gives it a fantasy feel whereas the abrupt ending of the feathers to the wall makes the studio situation obvious and pulls the viewer out of the fantasy aesthetic. Perhaps white drapery would have worked better?

Still.. over all it is a really interesting and well styled peice.
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*femketje Sep 29, 2009, 10:30:10 AM
so beautiful!

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~WeedBoyLV Sep 29, 2009, 10:33:44 AM
lovely!

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=andygoth666 Sep 29, 2009, 10:37:35 AM
lovely love the bunnies :heart:

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*MissLadyVenom Sep 29, 2009, 10:50:45 AM
The picture itself looks super sweet/cute. Love the dress and the corset is just stunning.

But you might want to work with the bunnies, I understand that they're slightly pasted in there (I assume that since it's a bunny on a balloon)

The first one in the forefront to the right of the picture (if you're looking at it) is fine.

The second one to the left (the one closer to your foot) looks really pasted on, badly... I'd look at fixing that up to show a bit more of the fluff (because looks hard lined)

Remember when you paste things on in Photoshop that all things have shadows. The bunnies would have a bit of a shadow around them depending on the light source.

Also, the floor is covered in drapey stuff, and the bunnies would have some stuck up around them (even if you tried to flatten it down a little in real life, it should still show as sticking up around them).

Other than the bunnies...I really enjoyed this picture!

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Rejected by The Sun and Moon, I Turn to The Stars
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=Ophelias-Overdose Sep 29, 2009, 10:56:42 AM
thanks :)

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=Ophelias-Overdose Sep 29, 2009, 10:57:10 AM
thanks !

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=Ophelias-Overdose Sep 29, 2009, 10:57:16 AM
thanks !

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=Ophelias-Overdose Sep 29, 2009, 10:59:19 AM
Thanks for your criticism!

I really enjoyed to read that you like my self-made dress and the gorgeous corset by V-Couture.

Please note that I am not the one who has done the post production, but I am sure that the photographer and editor will be very pleased about this piece of criticism!

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=Ophelias-Overdose Sep 29, 2009, 11:00:10 AM
thanks !

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